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Why does she continue to chase that blue bastard?
Why does she crave for the dust he leaves behind for her good riddance?
Why can't she see that he's too Free to be loved?
Why?Why does she ignores this?
The pain,the sadness..this sickens my heart...

Too many times have she cried for his love
Too many times have she's been rejected
Too many times have she been...unloved
What she offers is stronger than his so called Freedom

This time he made those feelings permanent
With the hit of a falling acorn
He stops in his tracks
Taking time out of his free life to bask in her beauty
Thus trampling a Rose;Withering it in the process..

He takes off with her
While the withering Rose dies from heartbreak
Her petals blew away in the wind
and so does her love
Only to be collected and healed by a mysterious darkness

Gathering every petal he could find
and putting them together in one peace for good
A new Rose was formed;even more beautiful than before
He promised to Love her,keep her and become one with her

So he did
"It hurts me..",She said,"His lies..His-".
"Never will I do that my flower..
Never will I leave you to feed on my dust that I leave behind.."
"Never will I forgive myself if I do..",The darkness said.
"So kiss me,and true love will be found"...



FIN
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greece4life Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's really nice! Gotta fave this one! :clap: Clap Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna Clapping Pony Icon - Fluttershy Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Dash Clapping Pony Icon - Vinyl Scratch Clapping Pony Icon - Pinkie Pie Clapping Pony Icon - Rarity Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Celestia Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle Clapping Pony Icon - Nightmare Moon Clapping Pony Icon - Applejack Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Cadence Joker Clap 
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NatsumiChan0446 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Bwwaahh!
Thank you!
Party Hard! 
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megazerofan Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;w; A beautiful ShadAmy piece. I'm not a big fan of ShadAmy personally but then I find pieces like these...I become a bit more of a fan of the couple.
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NatsumiChan0446 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You totally should ;;;;uuu;;;
Imagine the beauty if you ship amy and shadow!:iconohyoublushplz: 
thank you!!!!!!!!!
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megazerofan Featured By Owner Edited Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll think about it. Again, I was not a big fan of it at first, I'm still not THAT big of a fan but I'll consider it.
And you're welcome.
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NatsumiChan0446 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Well at least you enjoy this little poetry^^
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Starsinger1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lovely free-verse poetry!
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NatsumiChan0446 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!!!Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] 
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lorejavii Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
This is awesome!!!! (And very cute ^^)
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NatsumiChan0446 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you dearly!blush icon 
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